tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1453936498017729251.post2431278482437369502..comments2010-08-19T21:00:34.904-04:00Comments on nomorewhimper: A Thousand Threads In One (formerly Thread Prologue); finished poemRory Gibbenshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15844301065083257824noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1453936498017729251.post-81948320142172385552010-08-19T21:00:34.904-04:002010-08-19T21:00:34.904-04:00The entire Thread series is being renamed to refle...The entire Thread series is being renamed to reflect their identities as independent poems.Rory Gibbenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15844301065083257824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1453936498017729251.post-52681921451688746222009-09-02T17:20:54.631-04:002009-09-02T17:20:54.631-04:00As indicated by the title, this is a prologue poem...As indicated by the title, this is a prologue poem to a large series of poems.cRory Gibbenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15844301065083257824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1453936498017729251.post-71790505119620450982009-08-23T19:09:01.914-04:002009-08-23T19:09:01.914-04:00What I'm working on at the beginning of the po...What I'm working on at the beginning of the poem is a visual of the thread passing from far behind me and running out far off in front of me into an unknowable distance. Who knows how long the thread will run?Rory Gibbenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15844301065083257824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1453936498017729251.post-80445499891418251162009-08-23T17:35:09.724-04:002009-08-23T17:35:09.724-04:00threads are a theme in your writing... of stitches...threads are a theme in your writing... of stitches and sewing, etc.<br /><br />does the thread (and connectivity in general) have an end-point (as threads, do)? i love the visual in this poem that it travels to a singular point in an unknowable distance. <br /><br />beautifully written. sparse, thoughtful, and faceted metaphor.Cassiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11521072477912598862noreply@blogger.com