language loves desire; draft #4 (near final?)

Language loves desire and demands communication
but in words, more than just with body.
Love without language
lusts for body as animals without language.

Language comes from life, a dream to tell
that which cannot wholly be seen.
To make known
to relate in metaphors without body.

Language also is light piercing molecules of air.
Connects without touch. Communicates without
body. Moves without move.

Language Love (draft #3 of Freewrite B)

Language
like love desires, demands communication
but in words: more than just with body.
Love without language
lusts for body as animals without language.

Language
comes from life, or a dream to tell
that which cannot wholly be seen.
To make known and to relate in metaphors
without body.

Language
also as light piercing molecules of air.
Connects without touching. Communicates without
body. Moves without moving.

Free Write B: Draft 2

Language
like love desires, demands to communicate,
but words
more than just body.
Love without language
lusts for body,
as animals without language.
Language
comes from life, or a dream to tell
that which cannot wholly be seen.
To make known, and to connect
without body.
Language
also as light, piercing molecules of air.
Connects without touching. Communicates without
body. Moves without moving.

Free Write B: Draft 1

language is likened to love, a need to communicate
but more than just the body. Love without
language, lusting for the body like
animals without language.
Language comes from life, a desire to tell
that which cannot wholly be seen. To
tell, to make known, and to connect
without body.
Language also as light, piercing
molecules of air, passing by
tiny pieces of matter. Connects
without touching. Communicates without
body. Moves without moving.